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Me reading nonfiction: where is your thesis? Structure this argument more. What is your evidence for this?! Make this connection explicit. Cite more.
Me reading nonfiction: where is your thesis? Structure this argument more. What is your evidence for this?! Make this connection explicit. Cite more.
Me reading nonfiction: where is your thesis? Structure this argument more. What is your evidence for this?! Make this connection explicit. Cite more.
Me reading nonfiction: where is your thesis? Structure this argument more. What is your evidence for this?! Make this connection explicit. Cite more.
Me reading nonfiction: where is your thesis? Structure this argument more. What is your evidence for this?! Make this connection explicit. Cite more.
📸 William Gottlieb, ca. Sept. 1946
📸 William Gottlieb, ca. Sept. 1946
That and then the over-explaining/lack of confidence in the reader on the prose level are the two things that I run into with contemporary SFF (including/esp. romantasy) that bug me the most because they are eminently fixable with good editing.
GIRL: right? all these fuckin creepy old white men
GUY: like a broken record, it's this shit over and over every day
ME (pretty sure this is a conversation about Dark City): yeah plus who they bald asses tryna fool with those hats?? you know the homeboy psychic
GIRL: right? all these fuckin creepy old white men
GUY: like a broken record, it's this shit over and over every day
ME (pretty sure this is a conversation about Dark City): yeah plus who they bald asses tryna fool with those hats?? you know the homeboy psychic
if a writer will not trust the reader then the reader should not trust the writer.
if a writer will not trust the reader then the reader should not trust the writer.
That and then the over-explaining/lack of confidence in the reader on the prose level are the two things that I run into with contemporary SFF (including/esp. romantasy) that bug me the most because they are eminently fixable with good editing.