(Though it surely helps to have been well copyedited.)
Then I read it. I just read the thing I wrote, with "yes!" to all edits.
Then I go back to the other file and look at the edits one-by-one. It's game-changing to see it without the red.
*leans forward earnestly*
Any number of first-rate writers have committed "he thought to himself" in manuscript. (We used to keep a list.) What makes them truly first-rate is not balking when the copy editor CROSSES OUT THE OFFENDING WORDS.
(Though it surely helps to have been well copyedited.)
The July 4th flooding has become the first major disaster to expose the grave effects of Trump’s new food and hunger policies.
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One of the most chilling sentences I have ever read.
One of the most chilling sentences I have ever read.
A smart and evil man manipulated a stupid and evil man into a war against a fanatical and evil regime.
A smart and evil man manipulated a stupid and evil man into a war against a fanatical and evil regime.