2) make it shorter. make it more meaningful. EVERY line is *precious.* do not waste them
3) if your chars are just conversating, no they aren't. they're eating, leaning, playing with sleeves, scratching noses
2) make it shorter. make it more meaningful. EVERY line is *precious.* do not waste them
3) if your chars are just conversating, no they aren't. they're eating, leaning, playing with sleeves, scratching noses
(Tag yourself, I am Époisses)
(Tag yourself, I am Époisses)
Let's turn our fear and rage into community action.
Let's turn our fear and rage into community action.
tried and failed for hours to get the rig to work, gave up, greased him up more, and here we are.
Arse in the replies below
tried and failed for hours to get the rig to work, gave up, greased him up more, and here we are.
Arse in the replies below