That's so nice! Ty for sharing.
How has it been?

E.g. is the issue big picture (underdeveloped conceptualisation or structure), sentence level clarity, a good throughline, good synthesis and explication etc... Each have different fixes so extensive wordsmithing might not be a good use of your time

Ask what's wrong (and what 'wrong' means in your context) so you have actionable things to prioritise and work through, as generic 'fix this' is not good for students who are still learning + means supervisors are seeing things the student can't, and it's helpful to know. What does right look like?

That means that if we'd followed the 2023 policy track, we could have avoided over $1 billion in offshore mitigation to meet New Zealand's 2030 Paris Agreement NDC (>20Mt at say ~$NZ50/t). /ends

Canopy cover in this city is fucked and there's p much no incentive to get people to do better even given the impacts on things like microclimate / heat / drainage

it uses AI to detect when AI is being used to make AI sound more human

The latest HealthNZ news update outlines the bigger picture of what is being done:
- launched nationally coordinated response
- increased contact tracing workforce
- expanded immunisation access
- measles immunisation week (3-7 November)
- Auckland locations to be added to locations page soon
- etc