Bloody hell, that’s some impressive poetry right there. So powerful. That last line… wow. Thanks for sharing.

That’s gorgeous.

Ok… here’s another one…

it pulsed a while
in my subconscious
now ripples in yours
so I cannot find
the other two
😅🙏🙏
#poemsabout #desire #oulens

Thank you so much. I’m delighted you got that! It’s always such a joy when someone sees what you’re hoping to get across.

Thank you! I wanted to use the image of snow completely changing a once familiar landscape as a metaphor for a navigating a brand new relationship, and then lean into it with the final haiku. I hope I achieved that. It’s hard with our own work to unsee what we already know (if you get my drift!)

Thank you! ❤️

Thank you!

Thank you. Praise from poets I respect and admire is always the best! ❤️

Thank you so much. That’s very kind of you to say. I see a lot of brutalist poetry and I always feel a little as if my melancholy softer poetry doesn’t quite reach the oomph of other poets. I guess we’re all our own worst critics.

Thank you so much!