When a journalism student investigates a forgotten district, riddled with disappearances that it seems determined to ignore, she becomes entangled with a haunting stranger whose presence feels disturbingly inevitable.
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89,269 words. Act four and epilogue trimmed. Acts one and two felt-purge done.
Didn't do much today, too much uni work to do. But I did cut out all the struck-through stuff from my first read, AND got rid of over sixty uses of "felt" from act one and two :)
89,269 words. Act four and epilogue trimmed. Acts one and two felt-purge done.
Didn't do much today, too much uni work to do. But I did cut out all the struck-through stuff from my first read, AND got rid of over sixty uses of "felt" from act one and two :)
90,022 words. Act three edited.
First round of edits is still going strong. Alredy thinking of changes for the next. I hope this is as good as it feels.
90,022 words. Act three edited.
First round of edits is still going strong. Alredy thinking of changes for the next. I hope this is as good as it feels.
91,180 words. Acts three, four and epilogue marked up for editing
Got the entire second half ready for editing. It doesn't need as much adding to it as the first half, but it needs SOOOO much more taking out 😅 the hell was I thinking sometimes?? Some weird choices...
91,180 words. Acts three, four and epilogue marked up for editing
Got the entire second half ready for editing. It doesn't need as much adding to it as the first half, but it needs SOOOO much more taking out 😅 the hell was I thinking sometimes?? Some weird choices...
91,307 words. Fourteen and a bit more chapters edited.
I made a massive change today. After some troubling research, and talking with my wife and writing partner, I've changed some character names. It was a hard decision, but I think it's honestly for the best :))
91,307 words. Fourteen and a bit more chapters edited.
I made a massive change today. After some troubling research, and talking with my wife and writing partner, I've changed some character names. It was a hard decision, but I think it's honestly for the best :))
91,460 words. One and a bit more chapters edited.
I cut a lot of words today... and then immediately replaced most of them with new ones 😅 not to worry, I haven't even purged my 'had's, bulky dialogue tags or trimmed my triple adjectives yet 😅
91,460 words. One and a bit more chapters edited.
I cut a lot of words today... and then immediately replaced most of them with new ones 😅 not to worry, I haven't even purged my 'had's, bulky dialogue tags or trimmed my triple adjectives yet 😅
92,257 words. Preliminary edits of acts one and two complete
First day of the first round of editing. It feels weird to have my word count going down instead of up... got a feeling a lot of stuff I struck-through today wont survive a second edit. Good day though!
92,257 words. Preliminary edits of acts one and two complete
First day of the first round of editing. It feels weird to have my word count going down instead of up... got a feeling a lot of stuff I struck-through today wont survive a second edit. Good day though!
92,319 words. Four more completed chapters, act four and epilogue complete.
FIRST DRAFT COMPLETE
I'm ironically lost for words. I used them all up
Honestly, this feels amazing! I haven't finished a story since "The Blind Game" in 2019 :))
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92,319 words. Four more completed chapters, act four and epilogue complete.
FIRST DRAFT COMPLETE
I'm ironically lost for words. I used them all up
Honestly, this feels amazing! I haven't finished a story since "The Blind Game" in 2019 :))
#writing #wip #firstdraft
#questpit question number 3:
Is winter prevalent in your story? If not, how would it impact your story? (and if so explain a little :))
When a journalism student investigates a forgotten district, riddled with disappearances that it seems determined to ignore, she becomes entangled with a haunting stranger whose presence feels disturbingly inevitable.
#writing #wip #gothichorror
When a journalism student investigates a forgotten district, riddled with disappearances that it seems determined to ignore, she becomes entangled with a haunting stranger whose presence feels disturbingly inevitable.
#writing #wip #gothichorror
75,668 words. Three more completed chapters, act three complete.
Is it normal to suddenly lose a bunch of confidence in your writing when you realise you're in the final straight? Does it go away? Asking for a friend.
75,668 words. Three more completed chapters, act three complete.
Is it normal to suddenly lose a bunch of confidence in your writing when you realise you're in the final straight? Does it go away? Asking for a friend.
68,748 words. Three more completed chapters.
It finally happened. The monster has made itself known in a way that feels suitably over-the-top in its brutality but SO much fun to write. We're deep into the horror now, and I cannot wait to see where it goes!!
68,748 words. Three more completed chapters.
It finally happened. The monster has made itself known in a way that feels suitably over-the-top in its brutality but SO much fun to write. We're deep into the horror now, and I cannot wait to see where it goes!!
Things are moving quickly now, I can almost taste the end closing in!
Things are moving quickly now, I can almost taste the end closing in!
56,629 words. Two more completed chapters.
School is over for the holidays, so I'm back in Ebonhollow, tormenting a journalism student 😅 some trippy stuff in these chapters, not sure how much will survive the edit.
But it's good to be back!
56,629 words. Two more completed chapters.
School is over for the holidays, so I'm back in Ebonhollow, tormenting a journalism student 😅 some trippy stuff in these chapters, not sure how much will survive the edit.
But it's good to be back!
— Stan Lee
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— Stan Lee
writingforwellbeing.co.uk
#writing #WritingCommunity #WritersCommunity
When a journalism student investigates a forgotten district, riddled with disappearances that it seems determined to ignore, she becomes entangled with a haunting stranger whose presence feels disturbingly inevitable.
#WritingPrompt
When a journalism student investigates a forgotten district, riddled with disappearances that it seems determined to ignore, she becomes entangled with a haunting stranger whose presence feels disturbingly inevitable.
#WritingPrompt
Here is a thread of the advice of theirs that I liked.
A thread 🧵
Here is a thread of the advice of theirs that I liked.
A thread 🧵
50,987 words. Two more completed chapters, act two complete.
Act 2 is over, Act 3: Unraveling is finally here.
As I pass the long-awaited halfway point at 50k, I'm faced with the reality that, with school starting up again next week, Dark Wings will continue to haunt me
50,987 words. Two more completed chapters, act two complete.
Act 2 is over, Act 3: Unraveling is finally here.
As I pass the long-awaited halfway point at 50k, I'm faced with the reality that, with school starting up again next week, Dark Wings will continue to haunt me