One thing I learned, that I think you had too is to put off perfectionism, by just being content to put out imperfect work and slowly improving on that point.

Keep hustling 🤜🤛

I see, ah well it's just my two cents on it.

I suppose what makes writing fun is the way that there are so many styles of expression that are available to our hand, waiting to be learned.

Not sure where your are at, it's 2.30 am here haha. Time to sleep and see you with my next post.

Cheers~

I only reviewed the first picture, I felt like some expression is a bit lengthy, and some has slight confusion. Also i would prefer to add a comma on some natural stops when reading the story aloud.

But overall I like how that scene is built up, and it makes me want to read further ^^~

Yeah.... my English are mostly conversational usage, that I just let it flow and only able to spot obvious grammar mistake.

Will definitely keep up with correct usage. A necessary journey for aspiring writer, huh.

I see. Will definitely take a look

Good tips on using Google Docs to aid on the grammatical issues, as my text editor only check for spelling mistakes and not on grammar, totally forgot it's existence 😅

And really thanks on being my first "beta reader",
Hope there will be more posting to come :)

Sure of course, it will be a great learning journey for me ^^~

My next plan is to pick some books from the store or library to read more.

おはようございます〜

私も最近引っ越しました。日本語をまだ上手じゃないですが、Bluesky で練習することを考えています。

よろしくお願いします！

Threads は Instagram の follower が続けて持っているから、大規模に移らないかもしれません。

The whaling I know is more towards Gaming Industry 🤣

Saya Ada, selamat datang~

That's more like disintegration.

Hehehe

知っている人は、知っている。