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Sure, I’ll take a look

What genre is it?

it’s in my nature to convert the world into math and statistics. I have an obsession with spreadsheets

With 2 out of 20 odds, being in a 10Queries list is probably a bad sign

The rest of us have found your advice invaluable, whether it applied to our own work or someone else’s, so I’ll join my voice with the rest in offering heartfelt thanks! It has been an education, which is what the whole process is about

That is a super useful thing indeed. Thanks for posting it. I occasionally post some of the tools I make, in hopes they’ll be useful too

Oh, I wish I’d known a comp-finder database was a thing a month ago! lol

Either “Wow, that’s good. I’ll never write anything that good again.” or “What a bunch of crap. I should rewrite this entire thing.”

Same. LOL. I even changed the ending a little. A month is way too long for me to go without tinkering, especially when there's useful advice floating around in the teasers

Woohoo! Congrats to the lucky winner and runner up! I bet they'll be STOKED!

super useful info here! Thanks so much for sneaking this in!

Yes, thanks for posting all the feedback. Mine definitely wasn’t on the list, but there are still things I can consider for both my query materials and the story itself. Long way to go with that, but at least editing is fun

Although feedback for video games is a different beast, the phenomenon is the same. My approach is to assume that what they’re suggesting is a highlight of a type of problem. Relatability. Implausibility. Character arc. If I see several suggestions in an overall category, I address the category

GL!

good news for the authors of those subs. Cue the ominous music for the rest of us. lol

me too!