#writing #querying
"The elf that greeted him had long back hair and a scar on his chin."
"The elf that greeted him had long black hair and a scar on his chin"
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"The elf that greeted him had long back hair and a scar on his chin."
"The elf that greeted him had long black hair and a scar on his chin"
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#querying
#querying
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It was hard to accept, but no matter how close you are, some people won't read
It was hard to accept, but no matter how close you are, some people won't read
For me, when your characters become real is when the magic really starts because all of the interactions and clashes and dialogue just flow so much better
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For me, when your characters become real is when the magic really starts because all of the interactions and clashes and dialogue just flow so much better
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Maybe I should get some of those household chores out of the way first so I can celebrate unhindered afterwards.
I'm sure I'll remember the plot hole...
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Maybe I should get some of those household chores out of the way first so I can celebrate unhindered afterwards.
I'm sure I'll remember the plot hole...
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No plot armor here!
Now to think of how he'll win this.Lets see...
Oh no...
#writting
No plot armor here!
Now to think of how he'll win this.Lets see...
Oh no...
#writting
"Kiera requested teat from one of the servants."
(It's not that kind of place Kiera 😳)
"Kiera requested tea from one of the servants."
"Kiera requested teat from one of the servants."
(It's not that kind of place Kiera 😳)
"Kiera requested tea from one of the servants."
"He slapped his horse to send it off."
(I just picture mongo from blazing saddles KO'ing the horse)
Should be:
"He slapped his horse on the rump to send it off."
"He slapped his horse to send it off."
(I just picture mongo from blazing saddles KO'ing the horse)
Should be:
"He slapped his horse on the rump to send it off."
Also me: "He hopped that he wouldn't be scared after stumbling when she scarred him while hoping into the boat."
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Also me: "He hopped that he wouldn't be scared after stumbling when she scarred him while hoping into the boat."
😅
Me: *glances nervously at my first chapter's 12k word count*
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Me: *glances nervously at my first chapter's 12k word count*
😅
Looking to connect with the #writingcommunity
Looking to connect with the #writingcommunity
-We'd be around Shadar Logoth in 'The Eye of the World'
-We'd have just lost Gandalf in 'The Fellowship of the Ring'
-The starks would have just finished settling in at kings landing in 'A Game of Thrones'
-We'd be around Shadar Logoth in 'The Eye of the World'
-We'd have just lost Gandalf in 'The Fellowship of the Ring'
-The starks would have just finished settling in at kings landing in 'A Game of Thrones'