is your character being really dumb?

then they "had to ask their neighbour for the spare key"

When your hero saves the world and all is good, you could write "peace at last".

But how about instead you express that concept by saying: "The world your dad envisioned would happen if you simply put your keys back in the same place everytime."

you're welcome. more to come

#NewMetaphors #writer

never learns does he?

al-fresko! i love it. i'll get started...

creepy...i like it!

Part of the crime

“‘See something suspicious? Tell someone!’ That’s your whole thing!” André reminded the British Transport Police officer, “How is a person boarding a train that’s moving NOT suspicious?!”

“If it only started moving after they'd gotten on. Now show me your railcard or I’ll taser you.”

#hbp #writer

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