Good choice, can’t go wrong with a snack like that.

His evilness is not nuanced enough for me right now, he feels like some teenage girl’s serial killer OC. My tendency to flanderize my characters and overfocus on certain aspects of them will be the death of me, I swear.

All I’m asking is that he fulfills two core tenets: that he’s interesting enough to where the audience will want to read a whole book about him, and that he feels like a real person

Burnt Olives by Natasha Girshin is my next read. I have faith it’ll be a good book.