Jim the Vampire
jimthevampire.bsky.social
Jim the Vampire
@jimthevampire.bsky.social
Definitely not a Vampire - drinker of human beer. Wannabe Sci-Fi writer. WIP: Statues Erode aboard the Heavy Freight Vessel Tartarus. Next stop: What happened to Thalassa! Draft 1: 55k.
Damn! That's only a few words, but it's like being there. That smell is so evocative 🔥
November 11, 2025 at 2:48 PM
How is it I kinda know what is meant about it tasting like straw? 😄
November 11, 2025 at 2:46 PM
Thank you! It sort of stemmed from a bad mood, so definitely an author insert 😄
November 11, 2025 at 2:44 PM
Thank you kindly. It's horrible...but I like it 😄
November 11, 2025 at 2:42 PM
Oh my god!🔥🔥 That is fantastic. Congrats to you and Emily. Lovely but of work. Might have to ask if Emily does Sci-fi 😁
November 11, 2025 at 1:49 PM
Thank you. Seriously ♥️. I hoped this one would carry a bit of weight. It's a weird mood to be in. The angry fatalist.
November 11, 2025 at 1:47 PM
Sorry Carly. 😢

Some days, this is just how it goes. But...day follows night right? The sun will rise and chase it all into the shadows. Probably.
November 11, 2025 at 1:34 PM
Well they should be thankful for this nice but then 😄 bless their unknowing socks.
November 11, 2025 at 1:12 PM
😂

Of course. Why wouldn't that be the case 😂
November 11, 2025 at 11:06 AM
It's feels like despite sharing a succulent hamburger, these two may not like each other very much huh. 😄

Love this. Great work as always Sage! 🔥
November 11, 2025 at 10:53 AM
You treat your people better than I treat mine. 😄 This made me hungry.
November 11, 2025 at 10:22 AM
Nope, if the story so far has a flow it would be Normal - bad - worse - reallllly worse - sorry - better - fight back - act 3 (worse stakes) - act 4 (end?)

Elara takes a beating, doesn't cope. Toren tries to be there but doesn't have words to help (not that words would help) The well goes deep.
November 11, 2025 at 9:49 AM
When you recognise the words and feel that tickle of joy! ♥️🔥😊
November 11, 2025 at 9:25 AM
Sadly no. This is a warm up. Like the pre match. Act 2 is kinda inverted to some degree. All the personally bad stuff happens at the beginning. So Elara is just starting a good long wallow in shit at this point.

Bright side, it doesn't last forever. But it does get worse.
November 11, 2025 at 9:20 AM
Today's grumpy scene comes with a TW for depression and swears. It has a bunch of each.

Elara expresses some things to Toren.

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November 11, 2025 at 8:40 AM
You give those kitties the attention they demand right now you monster! I'm typing damn you! Can't you see me typing! Pet those kitties!

😄

Actually have added a slice this evening. I was in a rotten mood so I got Elara to take it out on Toren. Tomorrows snip might need a trigger warning 😮
November 10, 2025 at 9:19 PM
Cookies will probably work. Or cash.
November 10, 2025 at 7:40 PM
Unexpected Prince John! Take my little heart icon! I hope you are proud of yourself! ♥️🔥
November 10, 2025 at 6:50 PM
Any amount of laughter was probably more than it merited. I've spent too long writing some dad jokes for my story, I think it broke me 😄
November 10, 2025 at 6:39 PM
She is definitely coming back as a level 12 Paladin and expecting a quest reward.
November 10, 2025 at 6:24 PM