Jeni Chappelle
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Editor. Helped 200 novels into the world … so far 🥹 AuDHD. Chaotic good. Cat lady. Mostly here for the dopamine.
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OK... that you so, so much! This was the best ACTIONABLE feedback I have received!! I will work on it and post again later today (dentist appt now). Thanks again!!!
November 7, 2025 at 4:44 PM
OK... that you so, so much! This was the best ACTIONABLE feedback I have received!! I will work on it and post again later today (dentist appt now). Thanks again!!!
Ugh my rule-loving brain wishes there was a set time and it could be gauged that way haha
November 7, 2025 at 4:45 PM
Ugh my rule-loving brain wishes there was a set time and it could be gauged that way haha
YES! Now make it fit into one post with space for hashtags
November 7, 2025 at 4:41 PM
YES! Now make it fit into one post with space for hashtags
It's hard, especially in a pitch. But it's essential to us buying into the conflict!
November 7, 2025 at 4:13 PM
It's hard, especially in a pitch. But it's essential to us buying into the conflict!
just a quick note--"suicide" can get your post muted so you may want to more hint at that than say it outright
November 7, 2025 at 4:10 PM
just a quick note--"suicide" can get your post muted so you may want to more hint at that than say it outright
tbh I love this pitch as is. It draws on the reader's knowledge of the genre. I'd be interested for sure!
November 7, 2025 at 4:08 PM
tbh I love this pitch as is. It draws on the reader's knowledge of the genre. I'd be interested for sure!
Great vibes! I love the concepts you present, but they aren't quite coming together for me. It feels more vague than mysterious--try to be more specific to the elements of your story.
November 7, 2025 at 4:06 PM
Great vibes! I love the concepts you present, but they aren't quite coming together for me. It feels more vague than mysterious--try to be more specific to the elements of your story.
Pitches need a strong hook, but a logline doesn't
Here's some logline info. www.jenichappelleeditorial.com/post/essenti...
Here's some logline info. www.jenichappelleeditorial.com/post/essenti...
Essentials for Writers: Loglines
In 2022, we started asking for loglines as part of the submission process for the RevPit Annual Contest. Because this was new to the contest and a lot of the authors in our community weren’t …
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November 7, 2025 at 4:03 PM
Pitches need a strong hook, but a logline doesn't
Here's some logline info. www.jenichappelleeditorial.com/post/essenti...
Here's some logline info. www.jenichappelleeditorial.com/post/essenti...