Read it and let me know what you think.

You mean that his female characters don't have the same depth as his male characters?

Nice! I'm going to read Kafka on the Shore next. I'll let you know how it goes.

I'm throwing a Butterfinger straight into the trash right now

Trash...and...trash.

controversial but I'm going to say it's a trash candy bar

GM: Yes. Yes, you get it back. It's been four days. The combat is over. We're in a new scene.
PLAYER: I'd like to search the boat.
GM: You're not on the boat anymore.
PLAYER: We're not on the boat??
GM: Are you paying attention?
PLAYER: Wait. I actually lost 14 HP. Do I get all of that back?