Migoose
@immigoose.bsky.social
🏳️🌈 🇵🇭 | any/all pronouns | editing first draft of my gay fantasy novel | socials and stuff: https://immigoose.carrd.co/
From my chapter 8
A lot of rewriting in this that the snippet I've posted before doesn't exist anymore so here's a different scene where the mc is smashed
A lot of rewriting in this that the snippet I've posted before doesn't exist anymore so here's a different scene where the mc is smashed
December 8, 2025 at 5:31 AM
From my chapter 8
A lot of rewriting in this that the snippet I've posted before doesn't exist anymore so here's a different scene where the mc is smashed
A lot of rewriting in this that the snippet I've posted before doesn't exist anymore so here's a different scene where the mc is smashed
From my chapter 7
Part of cutting chapters/scenes is writing new ones. This is a new chapter so I have nothing to compare it to
Part of cutting chapters/scenes is writing new ones. This is a new chapter so I have nothing to compare it to
October 26, 2025 at 3:09 PM
From my chapter 7
Part of cutting chapters/scenes is writing new ones. This is a new chapter so I have nothing to compare it to
Part of cutting chapters/scenes is writing new ones. This is a new chapter so I have nothing to compare it to
From my chapter 6
😀: editing a chapter where my mc travels for the first time
😞: he's alone and the chapter is about loneliness
😀: editing a chapter where my mc travels for the first time
😞: he's alone and the chapter is about loneliness
October 19, 2025 at 2:14 PM
From my chapter 6
😀: editing a chapter where my mc travels for the first time
😞: he's alone and the chapter is about loneliness
😀: editing a chapter where my mc travels for the first time
😞: he's alone and the chapter is about loneliness
From my chapter 5
My dialogues still need a lot of work
My dialogues still need a lot of work
October 12, 2025 at 2:26 AM
From my chapter 5
My dialogues still need a lot of work
My dialogues still need a lot of work
From my chapter 4
Got rid of the part where I'd written that mc could understand the bird because it was already obvious
Got rid of the part where I'd written that mc could understand the bird because it was already obvious
October 5, 2025 at 6:20 AM
From my chapter 4
Got rid of the part where I'd written that mc could understand the bird because it was already obvious
Got rid of the part where I'd written that mc could understand the bird because it was already obvious
From my chapter 3
Originally, I wanted to hint the existence of aswangs in my story here, but it didn't fit so I had to cut it
Originally, I wanted to hint the existence of aswangs in my story here, but it didn't fit so I had to cut it
September 27, 2025 at 11:21 AM
From my chapter 3
Originally, I wanted to hint the existence of aswangs in my story here, but it didn't fit so I had to cut it
Originally, I wanted to hint the existence of aswangs in my story here, but it didn't fit so I had to cut it
From my chapter 2
Nothing much here. I'm showing an extra line for more context
Nothing much here. I'm showing an extra line for more context
September 20, 2025 at 10:19 AM
From my chapter 2
Nothing much here. I'm showing an extra line for more context
Nothing much here. I'm showing an extra line for more context
From my chapter 1
I've trimmed the paragraph because there are too many words for what I need it to do
I've trimmed the paragraph because there are too many words for what I need it to do
September 14, 2025 at 4:01 PM
From my chapter 1
I've trimmed the paragraph because there are too many words for what I need it to do
I've trimmed the paragraph because there are too many words for what I need it to do
progress: 160/160 scenes
after writing the last paragraph, i think i'll go with "From My Ashes" as the story's title for now
anyway, i'm taking a break from this wip to focus on consuming other media in preparation for the editing phase
after writing the last paragraph, i think i'll go with "From My Ashes" as the story's title for now
anyway, i'm taking a break from this wip to focus on consuming other media in preparation for the editing phase
July 5, 2025 at 3:52 AM
progress: 160/160 scenes
after writing the last paragraph, i think i'll go with "From My Ashes" as the story's title for now
anyway, i'm taking a break from this wip to focus on consuming other media in preparation for the editing phase
after writing the last paragraph, i think i'll go with "From My Ashes" as the story's title for now
anyway, i'm taking a break from this wip to focus on consuming other media in preparation for the editing phase
progress: 158/160 scenes
"Am I dead?" proceeds to yap for the entire chapter
"Am I dead?" proceeds to yap for the entire chapter
June 29, 2025 at 11:05 AM
progress: 158/160 scenes
"Am I dead?" proceeds to yap for the entire chapter
"Am I dead?" proceeds to yap for the entire chapter
progress: 155/160 scenes
(not shown in the image below) i wanted to raise the tension in this chapter by shifting between the fight scenes happening simultaneously, but i also wanted to keep the pov first-person and with the mc, so i made him narrate those even though he's not in them
(not shown in the image below) i wanted to raise the tension in this chapter by shifting between the fight scenes happening simultaneously, but i also wanted to keep the pov first-person and with the mc, so i made him narrate those even though he's not in them
June 22, 2025 at 10:22 AM
progress: 155/160 scenes
(not shown in the image below) i wanted to raise the tension in this chapter by shifting between the fight scenes happening simultaneously, but i also wanted to keep the pov first-person and with the mc, so i made him narrate those even though he's not in them
(not shown in the image below) i wanted to raise the tension in this chapter by shifting between the fight scenes happening simultaneously, but i also wanted to keep the pov first-person and with the mc, so i made him narrate those even though he's not in them