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Carly Hayward
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Book Light Editorial & #RevPit editor, Story Chat Radio co-host. Disabled. You'll usually find me cuddling w/ a cup of tea and a great book. She/her

Editing: https://booklighteditorial.com/
Podcast: https://www.storychatradio.com/
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Carly Hayward @fromcarly.bsky.social · 19d
If you could pick one of these familiars to be with you always, which would you pick?

#WritingCommunity #WritersLife #AuthorServices #AuthorCommunity #Editor #BookLightEditorial #BookCommunity #EditingFamiliars
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Testimonial from the author of The Tenfold Tenants and Stake Around and Find Out, E.V. Belknap! 🎊

#WritingCommunity #AuthorServices #AuthorCommunity #Editor #BookLightEditorial #BookCommunity #Testimonial
Solid dark green background. Turquoise texts on the top that says, “Testimonials.” On the bottom right corner, the company name, “Book Light Editorial” is there in green font next to a dark jade colored flower. On the left side of the graphic, there is a golden raven sitting on a branch that is covered in flowers. The main text reads, ““This was my second time working with Carly on self pubbing a novel, and I will absolutely be back for the next one. Carly has perfected the balance between critique and encouragement. Her belief in my story kept me going through the bits where my own was a bit lost. Self-publishing can be scary. Make it less scary with Carly in your corner. (I recommend the Glow Package: it works perfect for verifying made changes, so you don’t go on blind.)” -E.V. Belknap, author of The Tenfold Tenants and Stake Around and Find Out
November 18, 2025 at 8:49 PM
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What do we think of this embroidery dragonfly I made for @jenichappelle.bsky.social

#Embroidery #Dragonfly #BookLightEditorial
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November 17, 2025 at 6:19 PM
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A reminder to drop your questions here or DM us! Get answers to all of your editing or querying-related questions from experienced editors 💖 #FiFRevPit
reviseresub.bsky.social Revise & Resub @reviseresub.bsky.social · 13d
Don't forget to send us your questions for our Editor Q&A Video Panel, which will take place at the end of #FiFRevPit. You can comment here, send a DM, or send us an email.

#RevPitFiF #writingcommunity
Don't forget to submit your questions for our Editor Q&A Video Panel. [Black cat on a stack of books next to pumpkins, a candle, and leaves. Hashtag FiFRevPit]
November 17, 2025 at 4:01 PM
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We have solved the disappearing post problem! If you're looking for critique partners or just new writing friends, stop by #FiFRevPit #Match and introduce yourself and genre!
reviseresub.bsky.social Revise & Resub @reviseresub.bsky.social · 5d
Today's the day! Use #FiFRevPit #match and the genre hashtags to find your critique partners ❤️
Fall Into Fiction with RevPit. Critique Partner Matching. #FiFRevPit
November 14, 2025 at 6:16 PM
fromcarly.bsky.social
We repainted the front door and added this bronze Medusa knocker. What do we think?
A peach colored door with a bronze Medusa knocker in the center.
November 13, 2025 at 7:35 PM
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One of the harder things to really hammer down while writing if I'm honest. #writing #books
fromcarly.bsky.social Carly Hayward @fromcarly.bsky.social · 6d
Voice is demonstrated via tone, word choice, sentence structure, paragraph structure, use of description, exposition, narration, dialogue, pacing, themes, character archetypes, even subject matter.

#WritingTips #AuthorServices #AuthorCommunity #Editor #BookLightEditorial #BookCommunity
Solid white background. On the left side of the graphic is a staircase with red, gold, and blue flowers wrapped around it. The main text says, “Voice is demonstrated via tone, word choice, sentence structure, paragraph structure, use of description, exposition, narration, dialogue, pacing, themes, character archetypes, even subject matter. ” The company logo is on the bottom right corner, it's a lightbulb standing on top of an open book. Solid dark teal background. The main text says, “Disclaimer.” The body text says, “As always, general advice is complicated and hard. There are always exceptions and times when it isn’t applicable. This is why getting individual feedback can be so important. Remember: use the advice that works best for you and your writing!”
November 13, 2025 at 2:17 AM
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Voice is demonstrated via tone, word choice, sentence structure, paragraph structure, use of description, exposition, narration, dialogue, pacing, themes, character archetypes, even subject matter.

#WritingTips #AuthorServices #AuthorCommunity #Editor #BookLightEditorial #BookCommunity
Solid white background. On the left side of the graphic is a staircase with red, gold, and blue flowers wrapped around it. The main text says, “Voice is demonstrated via tone, word choice, sentence structure, paragraph structure, use of description, exposition, narration, dialogue, pacing, themes, character archetypes, even subject matter. ” The company logo is on the bottom right corner, it's a lightbulb standing on top of an open book. Solid dark teal background. The main text says, “Disclaimer.” The body text says, “As always, general advice is complicated and hard. There are always exceptions and times when it isn’t applicable. This is why getting individual feedback can be so important. Remember: use the advice that works best for you and your writing!”
November 13, 2025 at 2:10 AM
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From horror to fantasy to contemporary, setting is important, and can often become its own character. What inspired the setting for your story? #FiFRevPit #writersky #writingcommunity #writersofbluesky
Fall Into Fiction with RevPit. Prompt: What inspired your setting? #FiFRevPit
November 12, 2025 at 4:56 PM
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Testimonial from Kim Alexander, International best-selling author of the Demon Door series! 🎉

#WritingCommunity #AuthorServices #AuthorCommunity #Editor #BookLightEditorial #BookCommunity #Testimonial #Bookish
Solid dark green background. Turquoise texts on the top that says, “Testimonials.” On the bottom right corner, the company name, “Book Light Editorial” is there in green font next to a dark jade colored flower. On the left side of the graphic, there is a golden raven sitting on a branch that is covered in flowers. The main text reads, ““I met Carly the same day I saw Mad Max Fury Road, so she'll forever be linked in my mind to Furiosa—someone you absolutely want on your side! With Carly's guidance, I turned my pretty okay novel into something so much more—something alive. I always felt she loved my characters as much as I did; she simply got what I was trying to do, and helped me do it. I have no doubt that my book (and hopefully the many to come) is vastly improved by her involvement.’ -Kim Alexander, International best-selling author of The Demon Door series”
November 11, 2025 at 11:40 PM
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#FiFRevPit #writingcommunity #writersky #writersofbluesky
Fall Into Fiction with RevPit. Prompt: Are there holidays in your story? If not, how would your character spend their holidays? #FiFRevPit
November 11, 2025 at 5:10 PM
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Anyone else just trying to survive another Monday? Productivity is a struggle today but we gotta do what we gotta do!
A calico cat is laying on their side on a window cat bed.
November 10, 2025 at 9:39 PM
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#MockPit #FiFRevpit starts now! Until 8 p.m. ET, post your pitch and get feedback from editors and other participants. Feel free to jump in with advice and praise, too! The more feedback, the better.

#RevPit #writingcommunity #writersky #amquerying
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November 7, 2025 at 1:01 PM
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Let's see those #FiFRevPit participation badges! Post yours and tag us!

(If you didn't receive one, sign up for our Substack and make sure you get *all the freebies*! You'll want them as we recount our weekly wins! reviseresub.substack.com)

#RevPit #RevPitFiF #writingcommunity
November 7, 2025 at 1:16 AM
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I started #MockPit a literal decade ago on Twitter, when there was still a 140 character limit. Publishing has changed a lot since then, and I discontinued the event a few years ago as a lot of pitch contests started to fold.

I couldn't be more excited that #RevPit is bringing it back.
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November 6, 2025 at 11:10 PM
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Testimonial from Romance author, Brooke Blair! 🎉

#WritingCommunity #AuthorServices #AuthorCommunity #Editor #BookLightEditorial #BookCommunity #Testimonial #Bookish
Solid dark green background. Turquoise texts on the top that says, “Testimonials.” On the bottom right corner, the company name, “Book Light Editorial” is there in green font next to a dark jade colored flower. On the left side of the graphic, there is a golden raven sitting on a branch that is covered in flowers. The main text reads, “"I knew my manuscript had some gaps, but even with a critique partner and months of brainstorming, we couldn't figure it out. Carly nailed the problem in one read. Her edit letter articulated the issues so well I found myself nodding along as I read. I loved my manuscript before the edit, but with Carly's direct (though gentle!) guidance, I've been able to turn it into something better than I thought I was capable of producing. I can't recommend her enough! Brooke Blair, Romance author”
November 7, 2025 at 4:43 AM
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So excited for this #FiFRevPit mini-event!!!
November 6, 2025 at 7:40 PM
fromcarly.bsky.social
Lol this is amazing, please do this prompt. I want to see how many ESH (everyone sucks here) books we've got! #RevPit #FiFRevPit
reviseresub.bsky.social Revise & Resub @reviseresub.bsky.social · 13d
A favorite! Pitch your MC as an Am I The A****** post 🤭 #FiFRevPit #writingcommunity #writersky #writersofbluesky
Fall Into Fiction with RevPit Prompt: Pitch your MC as an AITA post. #FiFRevPit
November 6, 2025 at 7:14 PM
fromcarly.bsky.social
Get reach for #MockPit tomorrow over on the #FiFRevPit feed. It's really fun and helpful. You'll get advice from the editors as well as thoughts from the community! Building a community is the most important thing as a writer, so come hang out and find your people!
#RevPit #RevPitFiF
reviseresub.bsky.social Revise & Resub @reviseresub.bsky.social · 13d
TOMORROW! Want to practice your pitch before the next big pitch event?

Give & receive feedback in #MockPit tomorrow! Post your pitch and reply throughout the day between 8am EST-8pm EST

PS: Don't forget to give more than you get! #FiFRevPit #writingcommunity #amquerying #writersofbluesky
#FiFRevPit Tomorrow is #MockPit Fall Into Fiction with RevPit. Today: prepare your pitch. Tomorrow: post your pitch. Tomorrow: respond to others!
November 6, 2025 at 7:13 PM
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There are three types of voice in writing: author, narrator, and character.

#WritingTips #AuthorServices #AuthorCommunity #Editor #BookLightEditorial #BookCommunity
Solid white background. On the left side of the graphic is a staircase with red, gold, and blue flowers wrapped around it. The main text says, “Author voice = writing style. Narrator voice = the voice telling the story (i.e. POV). Character voice = the way your character thinks and speaks.” The company logo is on the bottom left corner, it's a lightbulb standing on top of an open book. Solid dark teal background. The main text says, “Disclaimer.” The body text says, “As always, general advice is complicated and hard. There are always exceptions and times when it isn’t applicable. This is why getting individual feedback can be so important. Remember: use the advice that works best for you and your writing!”
November 5, 2025 at 9:37 PM
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I don’t know about everyone else but I wish I could be as comfortable as my cat Echo is all the time.

#Cats #CatsAndBooks #BookLightEditorial
A gray cat is laying on pillows on a couch with their pink belly peeking out.
November 4, 2025 at 9:37 PM
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This is one of my favorite prompts. The responses are always wild! #RevPitFiF
reviseresub.bsky.social Revise & Resub @reviseresub.bsky.social · 15d
Today's prompt! Share the first gif that pops up when you enter your working title.

This should be a good one!

#FiFRevPit #RevPitFiF #writingcommunity
Prompt: Share the first gift that pops up when you enter your working title. [Fall Into Fiction with RevPit logo; hashtag FiFRevPit; leaves and a pumpkin]
November 4, 2025 at 7:32 PM
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Today's prompt! Share the first gif that pops up when you enter your working title.

This should be a good one!

#FiFRevPit #RevPitFiF #writingcommunity
Prompt: Share the first gift that pops up when you enter your working title. [Fall Into Fiction with RevPit logo; hashtag FiFRevPit; leaves and a pumpkin]
November 4, 2025 at 5:53 PM
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Writer's block? Try screaming into the void. Kidding.
Have you tried writing a different section of the novel?
November 4, 2025 at 6:08 PM
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What's everybody's favorite genre? And why?
#RevPitFiF
November 4, 2025 at 5:37 PM