I used PHM for the pitch, like above, for a strong hook, but I have other comps that are more recently published and more accurately align with where I foresee my book's placement in the market. Mine doesn't have aliens or spaceships either, but that's clear in my query from the metadata paragraph

It gets crazier though! I don't know who you are, lady, but my maiden name is Bergren which seems eerily close to yours...maybe we're doppelgangers?

A small but mighty group! I see you're pitching a Maine story, small world, but I'm writing one rn!!!

With sisters, a mentor, and former lover, my FMC has a core group of women around her in this sci-fi thriller: sapphic gender-bent Bourne Identity meets grounded Project Hail Mary if the amnesia was self-inflicted. In your query box rn 💌

Might you vibe with this sci-fi thriller premise? Sapphic gender-bent Bourne Identity meets grounded Project Hail Mary, but the amnesia is self-inflicted.

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Amazing! Just queried you with my story [REDACTED], a sapphic gender-bent Bourne Identity meets grounded Project Hail Mary if the amnesia was self-inflicted.

Thank you Simone Ashley and Hudson Williams for your service 🫡