Luisa
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When I’m sharing art or something here I feel like an animal crossing villager sharing the cool bug I caught
October 21, 2024 at 4:08 PM
When I’m sharing art or something here I feel like an animal crossing villager sharing the cool bug I caught
Reposted by Luisa
Writers, an easy thing to make your writing tighter: Take out "started to" and "began to."
Their phone started to ring ❌
Their phone rang ✅
He began to run away ❌
He ran away ✅
There are exceptions, but usually these words are clutter.
Their phone started to ring ❌
Their phone rang ✅
He began to run away ❌
He ran away ✅
There are exceptions, but usually these words are clutter.
October 21, 2024 at 8:07 PM
Writers, an easy thing to make your writing tighter: Take out "started to" and "began to."
Their phone started to ring ❌
Their phone rang ✅
He began to run away ❌
He ran away ✅
There are exceptions, but usually these words are clutter.
Their phone started to ring ❌
Their phone rang ✅
He began to run away ❌
He ran away ✅
There are exceptions, but usually these words are clutter.