"You're not who they told you that you are. I only hope that I've timed this letter correctly so that you have a chance to fix this."

Just recognize in advance that he's banking on marches so that he can call them "riots" & call them "insurection." He's waiting on a chance to sick the dogs & hoses on us. So he can declare martial law. Watch A24's Civil War film to understand.

Reached Degobah. He was already dead.

Now that I'm pushing 50 years old, most of those years are fuzzy, you know? I seem to recall the WIT sequels for sure, but I remember a book called Time Trap as well. When I was 12, I found the Watchmen graphic novel and well... things changed, lol

Without question, A Wrinkle In Time tops the list. First read to me by my 4th grade teacher. It set off a lifelong love of science fiction.

They're going to show this in her highlight reel when she wins at Wrestlemania

We're in for a TV adaptation on May 16th, I'm truly hopeful since Wells herself was heavily involved!

Here's the thing. The entire movie felt like it was a fever dream that Georgiou probably had the very first night she stepped into the Guardian portal. She probably woke up that next morning, shook her head, and said,"Wow, that was weird..."

Man, I was stuck there for SOOOOO long, lol

Dehydration, syncope (fainting), strains and sprains, heart attack, and concussion ( that last one typically at concerts, which is where my current scene takes place.)

Just yesterday I found myself googling "What common injuries to EMTs treat at festivals?"

A literal human turd is going to fart all over a podium for an hour, and half the room will applaud thunderously for it.

Yeah, I'm down for some Marvel TV myself!

Many thanks :)

I think what I'm getting is "compartmentalize," which makes sense. Your suggestion to use parenthesis kind of builds on what the other commenters are saying & I think I've been trying to tackle the writing in a strictly "linear" way & it's holding me back.

Thanks again!

Thanks! It took me a bit to fully understand the setting because the story takes place in "early fall" & "outside." It finally occurred to me that this scene takes place close to halloween, which definitely helps set the esthetic, which is what I think you're describing. Thanks again!

Thanks! I have that conversation mapped out already w key points I know both of them will make to each other that will move the story forward

It sounds like you're saying it's ok to write that first and go back to the opening of the chapter later when the inspiration strikes?

You don't need a social media presence, but you do need to be on my paid social media account to read why, lol