Now fixed. Many thanks. 👍

Thanks I’ll take a look at that.

yes, the first is much easier to read.

Thanks for the comment. The Elf Knight is a pan European myth. There's an excellent song on Youtube by Steel Eye Span telling the story. I just took the character and wrote the poem, (which doesn't follow the story at all).
Changed the line to read 'Unmoved by beast or storm or gale.'
Good catch.👍

I'm Bernard, currently working on a mess of a horror/detective story that's going all over the place and looks like it's going to get spiked (by me).

I read that as ‘One cannot create entire words…’ and I think that works just as well. 😃

If you share it online then maybe we can all join. Just saying 🫢

I suspect you may have come to the right place. 😃

Hi, basically the best advice you’ll get is, write it all down you can sort it out later. I’ve put a few tips on my website here: castlecs.co.uk/writing-tips

Welcome to the good place, it’s growing and it’s blue. 😀

My book, I still haven't decided on a title yet, is a satire on the publishing industry. The need to come up with the 'next new thing' regardless of how ridiculous and meaningless that is. It's complete, but I'm still editing (a never ending task).

Tell yourself, you need to finish before you begin. Editing is where the real work lies.

Remember there is more than one country. Most of them are free and not necessarily being taken in with the AI nonsense.