Bruce Byfield
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Bruce Byfield
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Some time writer about free software and open source and would-be novelist. Companion to parrots, collector of First Nations art, and ergonomic keyboard advocate. Now actively querying my novel "The Bone Ransom," a post-colonial fantasy.
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The Bone Ransom

Framed for his mother’s murder, hunted by his sister & her pet monster, Talson Ravenpiper joins with a traditional enemy to restore the family legacy. The problem is, maybe all legacies are not worth preserving. And some enemies become lovers.
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November 12, 2025 at 3:46 AM
Every time I revise my query package, I become hopeful again. Then a few days later, my revisions are rejected like before. #wriring #querying
November 11, 2025 at 5:37 AM
Querying is as much about learning as writing is. It's a wise idea to make your first few queries to agencies that are not highest on your list. Save your best agencies for after your first revisions of your query package. #writing #queries
November 11, 2025 at 4:21 AM
An info dump is more likely to work if

1. the pov character is the sort who would think about the subject

2. the info dump is relevant to the moment in the plot
#writing
November 10, 2025 at 10:08 PM
An agent who rejected TBR just liked my post about what to look for in an agent. The irony could cut like a knife. 😀 #writing #querying
November 10, 2025 at 10:02 PM
I think that the best reason for an approximate standard chapter length is that it helps readers decide whether to read one more chapter before they turn off the lights. #writing
November 8, 2025 at 6:23 AM
If you think that clear, simple language is dumbing down or selling out, consider that many young adult novels are as moving for adults as they are for the target audience. #writing
November 8, 2025 at 6:16 AM
I am never sure whether a rejection that explains that responses to queries are subjective & urges me to try again is a thoughtful kindness or a condescending string of platitudes. #writing #querying
November 8, 2025 at 6:11 AM
I would rather fail as a fiction writer than succeed using AI. At last I would enjoy my efforts.
November 8, 2025 at 6:03 AM
Two things can be true at the same time. Yes, Nineteen Eighty-Four is misogynistic by my modern standards. But it is also true that Orwell is politically astute. #Orwell #1984
November 8, 2025 at 5:52 AM
My keyboard would puzzle many users. It sets up home row mods, in which home row keys double as Shift, Ctrl, and Alt. This customization reduces finger movement, increases typing speed, and frees keys for other customizations.
#keyboards
November 8, 2025 at 5:47 AM
Today, I was reminded of the need to make multiple backups at different times. One corrupted file was not in two older backups, but mercifully was in a third. My next step would have been to see if my critique partner had saved a copy.
November 8, 2025 at 5:40 AM
My idea of a dream agent is someone who:

1. expresses interest in the ideas that are in the novel being queried

2. has either experience & connections, or enthusiasm & advice from more experienced agents

3. who works closely with clients

#writing #querying
November 8, 2025 at 5:34 AM
Maybe this is an ego-rescuing position, but occasionally I consider the possibility that a novel might be well-written but not publishable for marketing reasons. #writing #querying
November 8, 2025 at 5:12 AM
Weird. Just got a rejection,but with an invitation to submit to the rest of the agency. Probably a form reply, but who knows? #writing #queries
November 5, 2025 at 5:16 AM
I must be old. I remember when buying a new phone was exciting.
November 5, 2025 at 1:12 AM
AI users don't understand the differenc between inspiration and plagiarism. #AI
November 4, 2025 at 3:55 AM
To streamline queries:

* prepare .docx & .txt files for every sample length

* subscribe to QueryTracker to automatically fill forms

* use macros or autotext to automate other forms

* quote agents' wish lists and save common replies

Soon a query can be readied in 5 minutes. #writing #queries
November 3, 2025 at 11:55 PM
"Get a steady job & write on the side," young writers are often told, & following that advice can lead to a low stress life. However, a time can come when a low stress life is no longer enough, & an aspiring writer gambles their future, tired of being sensible & seeking fulfillment. #writing
November 2, 2025 at 6:43 PM
"Luddite" is often an insult, implying someone is anti-progress, these days often someone who is anti-AI. However, historical Luddites were a major part of the long fight for better working conditions and fairer wages. So please go ahead and call me a Luddite.
October 31, 2025 at 5:26 AM
How many drafts do I do? As many as I need to get everything right. Sometimes it's 6, sometimes 2. #writing
October 31, 2025 at 5:24 AM
They keep
a wolf's haunt, a hidden land,
a wild way of wind-bluffs
that writhes in mires where a rise's stream
hurls down cliffs into hill-dark
to seep-holes. Beside here,
by a tale of miles, the tarn lies,
overloomed by roots lean & reach,
frost-grasped trees that gape on the water.
- Beowulf
October 31, 2025 at 4:38 AM
"Luddite" is often an insult, implying someone is anti-progress, these days often someone who is anti-AI. However, historical Luddites were a major part of the long fight for better working conditions and fairer conditions. So please go ahead and call me a Luddite.
October 31, 2025 at 4:23 AM
A favorite boast of CEOs: "I feed X number of families."

Right. You run a charity, and get nothing back in return.
October 31, 2025 at 4:10 AM
Originality in fiction usually does not lie in the idea, but in how the story is told. #writing
October 31, 2025 at 2:03 AM