formerly at Penguin Random House and The Book Group
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But they do need to be compelling.
Here are the 6 most common character issues I discuss with my editing clients — along with my favorite tricks to make your protagonist unforgettable.
(Psst: Number 4 is the one I almost ALWAYS bring up.)
But they do need to be compelling.
Here are the 6 most common character issues I discuss with my editing clients — along with my favorite tricks to make your protagonist unforgettable.
(Psst: Number 4 is the one I almost ALWAYS bring up.)
But only 15% have started writing. And only 8% have finished.
It's no wonder the success rate is so low; it's incredibly difficult.
If you're deep in a rut, watch my latest writing pep talk!
www.youtube.com/watch?v=dDX...
But only 15% have started writing. And only 8% have finished.
It's no wonder the success rate is so low; it's incredibly difficult.
If you're deep in a rut, watch my latest writing pep talk!
www.youtube.com/watch?v=dDX...
Don't forget about all the smaller (but important!) milestones in between.
As author Catherine Dang told me, "Publishing is a long journey. Even when you reach one milestone, there’s always another one behind it."
Don't forget about all the smaller (but important!) milestones in between.
As author Catherine Dang told me, "Publishing is a long journey. Even when you reach one milestone, there’s always another one behind it."
Here are the 7 most common plot issues I see in early drafts, and solutions to fix each one!
Here are the 7 most common plot issues I see in early drafts, and solutions to fix each one!
Was it because...
👉 You have this story in your head that needs to be told
👉 Writing feels like an escape from the mundaneness of everyday
👉 It's a way for you to express your own life experiences
👉 You want to leave a legacy
👉 The book you want to read doesn't exist yet
Was it because...
👉 You have this story in your head that needs to be told
👉 Writing feels like an escape from the mundaneness of everyday
👉 It's a way for you to express your own life experiences
👉 You want to leave a legacy
👉 The book you want to read doesn't exist yet
But they have no idea what to cut. And they're terrified of making the wrong choice and hurting their story.
Here are some of my top tips for trimming your novel.
But they have no idea what to cut. And they're terrified of making the wrong choice and hurting their story.
Here are some of my top tips for trimming your novel.
Sometimes, taking a step back and slowing things down can work wonders, especially in your writing!
From author Allegra Goodman: "I’ve found that slowing down is necessary in order to solve problems and do serious thinking."
Sometimes, taking a step back and slowing things down can work wonders, especially in your writing!
From author Allegra Goodman: "I’ve found that slowing down is necessary in order to solve problems and do serious thinking."
"A young woman kills an animal and is taken to a magical land." 😴
Now what about:
"After killing a wolf, a young huntress is dragged into a dangerous fae realm as punishment — only to find herself falling for the masked faerie lord who holds her captive." 😲
"A young woman kills an animal and is taken to a magical land." 😴
Now what about:
"After killing a wolf, a young huntress is dragged into a dangerous fae realm as punishment — only to find herself falling for the masked faerie lord who holds her captive." 😲
Have you been keeping up with the writing goals you set for this year?
Having edited countless novels and co-authoring a book last year, I can vouch for two ways to keep your writing momentum going (even when it gets tough):
Have you been keeping up with the writing goals you set for this year?
Having edited countless novels and co-authoring a book last year, I can vouch for two ways to keep your writing momentum going (even when it gets tough):
Fact 2: It'll test your patience, your confidence, your sanity.
Fact 3: It’ll also be one of the most rewarding experiences ever.
Fact 2: It'll test your patience, your confidence, your sanity.
Fact 3: It’ll also be one of the most rewarding experiences ever.
Give the reader NO CHOICE but to keep reading.
But is your opening hitting the mark?
Here are the four key elements every strong opening includes:
Give the reader NO CHOICE but to keep reading.
But is your opening hitting the mark?
Here are the four key elements every strong opening includes:
The length affects the pacing and the publishing costs, so if you're WAY off the standard, you may want to revise.
Here's a general length guide:
The length affects the pacing and the publishing costs, so if you're WAY off the standard, you may want to revise.
Here's a general length guide:
Rest assured you don't need to:
-write every day
-outline every chapter
-come up with your magnum opus
But you DO need to be realistic and spend your time wisely.
Here's my no-BS strategy to reach the finish line. 🏁
youtu.be/lwuyeavPEWk
Rest assured you don't need to:
-write every day
-outline every chapter
-come up with your magnum opus
But you DO need to be realistic and spend your time wisely.
Here's my no-BS strategy to reach the finish line. 🏁
youtu.be/lwuyeavPEWk
Whether you plan to finish your draft, complete a revision, query agents, or publish your book, I want you to remember something important:
The process never ends.
Whether you plan to finish your draft, complete a revision, query agents, or publish your book, I want you to remember something important:
The process never ends.
Spoiler alert: they have nothing to do with clichés, adverbs, or "telling" over "showing."
Are you struggling with any of these?
Spoiler alert: they have nothing to do with clichés, adverbs, or "telling" over "showing."
Are you struggling with any of these?
Bad dialogue 🗣️
Here are the 7 biggest dialogue mistakes I see and how to revise them so your characters sound real.
Bad dialogue 🗣️
Here are the 7 biggest dialogue mistakes I see and how to revise them so your characters sound real.
I used QueryTracker data to analyze the top genre trends. Let's discover:
-the indisputable top genre right now
-5 oversaturated genres
-genres with the most agent requests
youtu.be/D5qrmB32C-Q
I used QueryTracker data to analyze the top genre trends. Let's discover:
-the indisputable top genre right now
-5 oversaturated genres
-genres with the most agent requests
youtu.be/D5qrmB32C-Q
"I'm not good enough to be a writer."
"No one will ever care about my stories."
"I'm wasting my time."
Look at the facts: all the pages you've written, the readers who've loved your story, the incredible progress that you've made.
"I'm not good enough to be a writer."
"No one will ever care about my stories."
"I'm wasting my time."
Look at the facts: all the pages you've written, the readers who've loved your story, the incredible progress that you've made.
Here's to more writing in 2026! 🥂
Love, Alyssa & Luka 🐾
Here's to more writing in 2026! 🥂
Love, Alyssa & Luka 🐾
I'm not saying you have to outline every chapter, but locking in these 5 core elements before you draft will save you major overhauls.
I'm not saying you have to outline every chapter, but locking in these 5 core elements before you draft will save you major overhauls.
Not just the chart-topping bestsellers. Also the debuts!
Here are the top 5 (hard) lessons they taught me about what it REALLY takes to write a novel. 👇
Not just the chart-topping bestsellers. Also the debuts!
Here are the top 5 (hard) lessons they taught me about what it REALLY takes to write a novel. 👇
Are you making any of these common mistakes?
❌ talking heads
❌ name dropping
❌ "As you know, Bob"
❌ melodrama
❌ too many tags
❌ filler
❌ messy formatting
Are you making any of these common mistakes?
❌ talking heads
❌ name dropping
❌ "As you know, Bob"
❌ melodrama
❌ too many tags
❌ filler
❌ messy formatting