The rim lighting looks so good, especially the one on the Top of the lips

Also the idea to draw the cum in the shape of a heart is pure genius

I really like the shape design in this drawing,
Specifically, I really like how you did the highlight on the balls

Thank you

After a day I've changed my mind, I don't like this drawing anymore.
I don't like how objectifying & male gazey it is.
I don't like how the crop makes it look like an upskirt shot.
I don't like how the guy character is looking at the butt/vulva, in hindsight it's kinda creepy.