Don't banish adverbs, just examine their use closely and replace them when it feels right.
Don't banish adverbs, just examine their use closely and replace them when it feels right.
For example, instead of saying he said something softly, you could say he whispered, used a hushed voice,
For example, instead of saying he said something softly, you could say he whispered, used a hushed voice,
My MMC starts off abrasive and scary, so he's probably sour gummy worms.
By the end of the story, much of his rough exterior has been removed and his motivations are clear. He's resilient and sweet like a gummy bear.
My MMC starts off abrasive and scary, so he's probably sour gummy worms.
By the end of the story, much of his rough exterior has been removed and his motivations are clear. He's resilient and sweet like a gummy bear.