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Keely Brice
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Author of upmarket fiction. Reader. MFA. A story shows a thousand pictures.
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November 13, 2025 at 8:24 PM
5. Let them change — or fail to.
Growth (or refusal to grow) is what turns a character into a human being. By the end of the story, they should be different — even if that difference is heartbreakingly small.
October 23, 2025 at 6:29 PM
4. Give them a past.
You don’t need to dump a backstory on the reader, but you should know it. The way someone walks into a room, reacts to rejection, or shows love — it all comes from somewhere.
October 23, 2025 at 6:28 PM
3. Listen to their voice.
Dialogue is more than words; it’s rhythm, silence, and subtext. Pay attention to how your characters speak — their vocabulary, what they avoid saying, and what slips out when they’re tired or emotional.
October 23, 2025 at 6:28 PM
2. Know what they want — and what they fear.
Every decision a person makes is a tug-of-war between desire and fear. A believable character has both, and those forces drive the story far more than external events do.
October 23, 2025 at 6:28 PM
1. Start with contradictions. Real people are full of them — brave but insecure, generous but stubborn, kind yet selfish in moments that matter. A good character contains tensions that make them unpredictable but understandable.
October 23, 2025 at 6:27 PM
I have written 4 fab #books (3 of these books are in the hands of many great agents). I graduated from a 4 year MFA program, where I studied craft & got weekly ass-kickings in workshop to make me a better writer and learn to cope w/ the 1,000s of rejections that have come my way in #publishing 4/?
April 23, 2025 at 5:24 PM
But what do they want and how do we get the books they want into their hands when so much of promotion is done on socials? How do we know what readers want when #TraditionalPublishing latches onto trends? Readers buy these books because they can't buy what doesn't make it to the "shelves"? 3/?
April 23, 2025 at 5:19 PM
Specifically, they are done scrolling AI and paid content infested #SocialMedia. They are ready to read books again! Some are actually going back to hardcopy. I heard other people say they are even tired of the myriad choices of TV series and movies. Yay!
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April 23, 2025 at 5:14 PM
Thank you, Raquel! Very helpful.
April 11, 2025 at 8:29 PM
Thank you ! Always a joy and learning experience to read your posts. Good luck with the winter weather. I grew up in WI, so I am very familiar with March and April snow storms. Now I live in the south and tell people here that it's not the Midwestern winters that lead to madness, it's the springs!
March 30, 2025 at 9:17 PM
Last year I did sub to you, and there was one 10q's that sounded exactly like mine but wasn't. I still think about that and wonder about the MS and author...
March 29, 2025 at 3:53 PM
Thanks. I was actually referring to after a client has already written a book. Do you make suggestions to make it trendier? For ex, I had an agent say he would take a second look if I changed a character's career from gymnastics to basketball because more people can connect.
March 25, 2025 at 12:15 AM
Hi Natasha! Wondering if you give your client advice about trends (modes of storytelling, themes/settings/characters that the industry is hungry for), and what would that look like? Do you ever edit a really well written book that you know won't get a deal because it's ahead of/ behind its time?
March 24, 2025 at 4:38 PM
Meh, just follow them. This is a community in a pretty public space. Follows don't mean much.
March 20, 2025 at 7:19 PM
Aw, I love this! Feels like the good ol' days again!
March 13, 2025 at 5:36 PM
logline: When a girl saves the life of a mysterious fugitive he promises her immortality if she writes a bestseller by 25, but when she sets out to build the largest platform by any means necessary, her best friend’s mother, a billionaire recluse, ensnares her in the plans for her daughter's legacy
March 3, 2025 at 10:22 PM