Good luck with your work, and take your time! Your designs are a treat regardless

A particualr thing that caught my attention, were Iwy's ears and tail - you made it clear that there is some worldbuilding behind it, that there is conflict in thr world regarding prople with such traits - I wanted to learn more, so here I am.

Ooh, I'd say, outside of the art style, they had a bit of mystery around them, or so I felt. The premise of a possible story with them, maybe some more glimpses of a setting, the vibes that gave me a feeling of early 2000's anime.

Best of luck in this endeavour!

That's a really nice artwork! This one feels pleasantly atmospheric - I'd love to see more of the world Iwy lives in

I'd love to read it

I am glad to have been helpful :) Have a nice time!

Good luck with your future work!

But then English isn't my first language, and while I can sometimes tell if something sounds odd, it's not a 100% accurate guarantee - and also, feel no pressure to make any changes :> I did very much enjoy it as it were

On the page with the ringing bell - "dose" should be "does" but as an intentionally bit comical spelling it could work
On the same page "those are! -horns!" Would sound ever so slightly more natural as a question "are those? Horns?"

The phrases that were a bit unnatural (but never too bad) were:
- "the era of conflict between monsters and humans was something that ended a while ago" - sounds a bit odd, I'd maybe rephrase it as simple "era of conflict between monsters and humans has already ended some time ago"

Hey! All of it is legible even if there are some awkward phrasings.
The only thing that confused me was the "the surviving monster built a town" on the first page - unless there was only one monster, it should be plural "monsters" there

It was good! The mood is a bit dreamlike, character designs are adorable, and the gag with the cats falling on their feet did get me. I'd love to see more

Ah, understandable- thanks for the clarification - I'll give it a shot

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