I like that there is no inbetween in her blowout, she just snaps instantly back to her facade

Also i like beat of this song, it reminds me of Eurovision songs lol

You should listen to Works for everything, a 2006 album of eiko ishibashi, it has some good songs i think you will like, tho theyre burried between more experimental ones if you dont mind

he SO wants to get shot

If the visual novel doesnt actually include guns maybe make the player fingergun and say "pew pew" so that its still somewhat in like with the idea

You look like a dead/beat anime dad whose only picture is obscured by lighting so that the audience knows he's not coming back