Don't do it, its just as bad as the first time!

Please please make this an actual show for mtg, that'd be crazy good.

Well it certainly made me giggle.

Considering it was just a series of shots of the same white guy oddly named Lockjaw being a creep in a variety of ways about black women, yeah I wouldnt say its a comedy. More like an over fetishized horror movie about a black woman and her daughter who cant catch a break from a perv.

Dude, at the book store the other day I got so frustrated there were only romance fantasies. I was at some point grumbling because I had managed to pick up 5 books in a row that were nothing but ancient men with the "chosen" female hero. There is a market for what you're writing.

Considering there are tentacles crawling out of its toothed, open chest cavity. I'd say the equine lordosis and ensuing kissing spine are the least of your worries. Maybe approach with a sacrifice instead of a saddle, especially if its a chestnut mare.

I just started reading your book a few days ago, and Ive had to pace myself so I dont read it all in one sitting. It is absolutely fantastic and enthralling. My favorite character so far is the man with the skull cup!