congrats 🎉

you’re welcome!

much better 👏🏾 not vague anymore! “descends” has an extra “s”. i do wonder how the nightmares + tarot reading + joining coven all connect, but i think that’s the point to get the agent to the pages.

i agree with the other commenter what is it about her dreams turning into nightmares that makes her have to consult her coven? how did the man betray her & why should she forgive him? how/why will she be swallowed alive in the dark? will she die in her sleep/the nightmares?

it really is super nice!!

great work 👏🏾

exactly! and that sandwich looks GOOD!

congrats 🎉

it cracked me up writing it! thanks

thank you , will have to wait and see 👀

hmm i wonder what the secret is??? 🧐

thank you 😊

i’m here for the vamp stories! 🥂

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