i can't speak for everyone, but i donate to your patreon not because i expect a perfect rhythm of stories but at least in part because you've ~already~ written amazing things that i think you deserve compensation for, and because i want to support your next project whether that's writing or resting.

reading this the day after writing hypnosmut that references foucault made it feel like such a subtweet that i actually went back to check that i'd spelled it correctly.

amazing, tysm. agreed on all fronts, esp. that dragging out lily's emotional beats would've been fun; "squirming on the hook" is a delightful way to put it. and no, you're not coming across as over-critical. you're being more than sweet, and in any case the feedback was invited. appreciate the time!

thank you so, so much! i'm sure you're overwhelmingly busy, but if you have time i'd love to hear any critiques (here or in dms); trying to get better before my next, longer, story. otherwise, thank (and curse) you for your stories!

thank you! i fucking ~loved~ so let me.

thanks for the feedback! i'll reflect on this as i write my next story.

oh my god.