although one thing I do think is odd is how whenever is when she IS rapping, the "tone shifts" during each verse sound a bit too unnatural, if that makes sense

probably like the slightest bit corny, but I think the concept of it has potential. I'd just say keep messing with it until u get something cool!

you really are growing into your own as a music artist, I'm proud of u man!

deltarune swap type song ✨

it's still just practice cuz I'm not that good at bass yet