There are a couple of frames that could use tweaks- the bikini covering the rightmost breast has a noteworthy and distracting warp. The face also has slightly more jigger than I'd like.

I can see a couple of tweaks that would improve it- a bit more smoothness in the leftmost part of the hip swing, and a little more consistency in the outer edge of the right thigh.

Animating the hair would've earned brownie points, but there's value in something to contrast with the movement.

The barometric pressure is rising; must mean a Storm will be coming soon 🤔 We can hope, anyway 🤣

Main three critiques I see off the bat:
1. Belly button jitter.
2. The rightward hip swing could be read as coming towards the viewer instead of just being lifted;
3. The hand that peeks out mid-animation has hair *behind* it, when the hand is supposed to be fully behind the head.

Gotta soften that belly button lift in the rightward extreme of the loop 🤔

Less shoulder pain means more frames, smoother animation, and more consistent details. Who'd a thunkit?

Bikini bottom also needs a trim. I double checked the width, but slipped on the change in the shape; her bum is turning *away* from the camera, so we shouldn’t be seeing more of the bikini in those frames 😭😭😭 my brain transposed the angles 😭