I think everything in your artstyle works really well,(... But...)
I think you need to practice more your composition, making the scene more dynamic.

Try seeing any good webcomic page or look for composition tips on YouTube

Don't let the small like count upset you!!! You're doing great mate

Another soldier folds

Dunno sir, i think tags would help your posts so much. Even putting more general ones can help as hell in bluesky