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AKA behold the epic mess of my editlog for a format-heavy scene.
This contains spoilers for a big scene in Ch. 5 of Separate Seasons(☕!🦚🛁). Read only if you want to.
(CW: flashbacks/dark themes)
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There's still a lot of brain power needed, but basically... I've had prior practice, is what I'm saying w
There's still a lot of brain power needed, but basically... I've had prior practice, is what I'm saying w
Everyone has their own writing style, and this just happens to be mine!
I don't know if there's any additional pointers I can give, but I hope the editlogs show my general logic while writing scenes like these!
Feel free to drop questions if you have any <3
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Everyone has their own writing style, and this just happens to be mine!
I don't know if there's any additional pointers I can give, but I hope the editlogs show my general logic while writing scenes like these!
Feel free to drop questions if you have any <3
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I would consider this scene finished - barring the two teeny bits I'm debating on deleting - so this editlog will end here!
You'll see the final version when the chapter is posted.
I hope the annotations were helpful - it was really fun doing them lmao.
I would consider this scene finished - barring the two teeny bits I'm debating on deleting - so this editlog will end here!
You'll see the final version when the chapter is posted.
I hope the annotations were helpful - it was really fun doing them lmao.
This is Draft 2 of the same scene (Separate Seasons Ch. 5), about as raw as it can get (i.e. exactly after writing it, zero checks for grammar/vocab/etc).
The word count has gone from 800+ to 1.5k words for the same section.
This is Draft 2 of the same scene (Separate Seasons Ch. 5), about as raw as it can get (i.e. exactly after writing it, zero checks for grammar/vocab/etc).
The word count has gone from 800+ to 1.5k words for the same section.
We're editing the section annotated in *black* (Pic 1). This is the *rough draft*.
To help visualize, I've annotated the parts in Pic 2. Read L→R, up to down.
(You will need to zoom 🙇♀️!)
We're editing the section annotated in *black* (Pic 1). This is the *rough draft*.
To help visualize, I've annotated the parts in Pic 2. Read L→R, up to down.
(You will need to zoom 🙇♀️!)
There's definitely a trust the process moment and I suspect once the entire work is complete, the effect will be pretty subtle, but I like it.
There's definitely a trust the process moment and I suspect once the entire work is complete, the effect will be pretty subtle, but I like it.
To more exciting (but not too much lmao) adventures (real or otherwise fictional) in 2025!!!✨ - Vemy ❤️
To more exciting (but not too much lmao) adventures (real or otherwise fictional) in 2025!!!✨ - Vemy ❤️
Alternatively I might put up print-ready copies of my books on ko-fi at the minimum price for those who want to diy!
Alternatively I might put up print-ready copies of my books on ko-fi at the minimum price for those who want to diy!