Yes i would say you are 🤣

Fair enough 😅

Writer’s-got-talent style first page critiques!

if the audience is undergrad age, i would keep the characters in undergrad. I would only age up if the content feels too mature for undergrad, personally!

What age group do you think will be reading your book?

Yay have fun!! Love the cruise post!! Bless travel writers like you. So helpful

1) lightning lane multipass is worth it, a fair trade of money for time... let the mouse swindle you 😅

2) dont plan too many table service meals. They overfeed you and take all ur time and money.

3) be a kid & play along. Pretend the characters are the “real” ones from the movies.

Well done!! I was totally immersed in this little scene

“Soft springtime daylight warmed the workshop” 😍

Beautiful

I enjoyed it!

So far i’ve enjoyed writing him trying to impress her with his artistic plating & finding something to clean near her whenever she’s in the kitchen 🥹 so far its been a lot sweeter than i had intended! Not quite as on-the-nose spicy. Gotta let all these flavors get to know each other in the pot 🤣

🤞🏻🤞🏻🤞🏻

Looks like a great time!! I can’t wait until my son is old enough for this kind of book