https://www.youtube.com/channel/UC7nlDbVDfiQwgYGQI8LFuqw
I write sometimes too
https://www.royalroad.com/fiction/56643/champions-of-itaro-cultivation-fantasy
I just think the character voices are wrong. Alfred doesn't keep his accent, there's a lot of weird phrases, noticed a typo. Some things just read weirdly and out of character.
I just think the character voices are wrong. Alfred doesn't keep his accent, there's a lot of weird phrases, noticed a typo. Some things just read weirdly and out of character.