i think i see what you mean though. it's fine at first glance but staring at it too long just feels a tiny bit off in a way that's really annoying to pinpoint. at a gut check i might look at the shape on the jaw, but i'm a moron and dimwit

where's "do the perspective lines line up the way they should?" or "is the face shape correct for the angle"

at least I think I remember reading a post a while back explaining that it took them a long time to realize how like, the ears worked in perspective in relation to the eyes or somesuch.

staring at the shot in the original a bit it strikes me how the eyepatch is just totally black and running across the head, giving it some vibes of a fractured psyche and a sense of emptiness. also it feels like it's closer to shinkawa's art.