But it’s also sort of messy
Though being perfectly clean
Your mind projects the nasties
And the best part is cleaning them up
#poetry
But it’s also sort of messy
Though being perfectly clean
Your mind projects the nasties
And the best part is cleaning them up
#poetry
A key to the heart
A key to expression
A key to feelings
A key to passion
A pen and paper is a gift
A gift for us all
To use to its fullest
Til we go to bed forever
#poetry
A key to the heart
A key to expression
A key to feelings
A key to passion
A pen and paper is a gift
A gift for us all
To use to its fullest
Til we go to bed forever
#poetry
I know who you are
When I grow sleepy
Your face as clear
When I am in my slumber
But as I awaken
Your face becomes blurry
Because it’s hard to focus
On you when you’re not here
#poetry
I know who you are
When I grow sleepy
Your face as clear
When I am in my slumber
But as I awaken
Your face becomes blurry
Because it’s hard to focus
On you when you’re not here
#poetry
To take that big step
To be so dependant
All of the time
It’s scary and sad
To feel so trapped
No matter what steps
Are to be taken
In this game of life
#poetry
To take that big step
To be so dependant
All of the time
It’s scary and sad
To feel so trapped
No matter what steps
Are to be taken
In this game of life
#poetry
They can be so big
But give such little
Hundreds of characters
Yet so little space
So much money
But so little to spare
Is this the universes cruel way
Of showing us whose the boss?
#poetry
They can be so big
But give such little
Hundreds of characters
Yet so little space
So much money
But so little to spare
Is this the universes cruel way
Of showing us whose the boss?
#poetry
#poetry
#poetry
You rush to the hole desperately
In attempts to fill it up,
and make everything all better again
The hole is really big this time
So you’ll have to work harder,
Hardest you’ve ever worked
I almost feel bad,
Making you do all of this for me
#poetry
You rush to the hole desperately
In attempts to fill it up,
and make everything all better again
The hole is really big this time
So you’ll have to work harder,
Hardest you’ve ever worked
I almost feel bad,
Making you do all of this for me
#poetry
After many years of
Delicate reflection that
I would have grown and changed
As a person and as a friend
Everything you told me before
You crushed and went back on
In less than a single minute
I thought that I have been alright
I had some slip ups
I’ve been wrong
And I’m sorry
After many years of
Delicate reflection that
I would have grown and changed
As a person and as a friend
Everything you told me before
You crushed and went back on
In less than a single minute
I thought that I have been alright
I had some slip ups
I’ve been wrong
And I’m sorry
You’re not in my life
You’re still in my head
I get on with hobbies
You’re still in my head
I’m doing what I enjoy
You’re still in my head
I’m trying to have fun
You’re still in my head
I’m trying to go to sleep
You’re still in my head
You’re not in my life
You’re still in my head
I get on with hobbies
You’re still in my head
I’m doing what I enjoy
You’re still in my head
I’m trying to have fun
You’re still in my head
I’m trying to go to sleep
You’re still in my head
2, and so youthful
You’re so fill of energy
So tidy and clean
Cute little kitty
Some day you will grow old
And you’ll become slow
Tired and worn out
Your fur all scruffy
But I’ll love you the same
Every day of your life
#poetry
2, and so youthful
You’re so fill of energy
So tidy and clean
Cute little kitty
Some day you will grow old
And you’ll become slow
Tired and worn out
Your fur all scruffy
But I’ll love you the same
Every day of your life
#poetry
With my friend in voice call
I am drunk rn
And it’s really fun
And I love my friend
Soooo much
He’s the best
And I wouldn’t trade him for
Anyone inc the word
#poetry
With my friend in voice call
I am drunk rn
And it’s really fun
And I love my friend
Soooo much
He’s the best
And I wouldn’t trade him for
Anyone inc the word
#poetry
If you have time to spare can you please critique my poems in the reply section of this post? Tell me what I can do better?
I'm new to poetry and feel strongly about it so I would love to get better
if you don't want to that is okay but i look forward to seeing what I can improve
If you have time to spare can you please critique my poems in the reply section of this post? Tell me what I can do better?
I'm new to poetry and feel strongly about it so I would love to get better
if you don't want to that is okay but i look forward to seeing what I can improve
but I don't wanna open up too much
I don't wanna be too direct with it,
so I have decided against it for now
but I don't wanna open up too much
I don't wanna be too direct with it,
so I have decided against it for now
and your best years can pass you by
before you even know what happened
I miss being in school
I miss my biggest care being
if I will see my best friend later
if class is going to be fun
all of that petty drama
It felt so great maybe in hindsight
but...
and your best years can pass you by
before you even know what happened
I miss being in school
I miss my biggest care being
if I will see my best friend later
if class is going to be fun
all of that petty drama
It felt so great maybe in hindsight
but...