😂 at “flatter than the paper they’re printed on.”

That the character’s arcs seemed very flat.

I ended up finishing it after all my complaining LOL

I don’t think I’ll be reading book 2.

So sorry to hear that. Madeline was so supportive and a great help when I was a newbie author. She will be missed

Slight changes in a character’s dialogue can also reveal character development

Such a wonderful lady. She’s inspired so many other authors, me included, to keep writing.