Sorry if some of this is worded weird but yea

I just think you should choose more interesting/compelling topics tbh. The John Lasseter video is the most interesting video essay I’ve seen from you by a wide margin, you just really need to figure out what made that one work

Whst is Wromg

especially for this being your first time,, it looks great

this looks rlly good 2 me

I like the pacing and how the characters are written. The animation is pretty good as well. Just work on the audio mixing next time, a lot of sound effects are too loud or sound unnatural. Also maybe try re-recording and mixing the theme song, it sounds pretty awful😭 But good cartoon overall

ahhh I see

It would be better to just redraw it completely

I don’t like the colors and Im into drawing less cartoony proportions atm,, and its a boring pose