I'm super late to the game but I'm really intrigued by this! I hope you don't mind me working through this a little later

Yus, this exactly! If we always stick to our comfort zone, the zone never grows 💜

Poor David. Now knowing what it's like to fill a house with that much smoke, I can't help but feel even more sympathy for him. He may come on a little strong, but he tryin! Now maybe if he tried paying more attention to what's going on around him...

Can't get over how moody you look XD It's that concentration frustration. Damn I just love your work tho

Too pretty for his own good. Your lines always kill me

Excuse me, that "thing" is a complex character: at times, a fresh and delightful sunflower (who resents your tone, btw); at others, a void.

Ikr? What a palaver! The only petition I saw was to stop it coming in. I, too, would be interested in knowing if there is one to shove it back out

Ctrl + f "that", "was", "were" and "had been". Really interrogate whether those words are necessary. Sometimes they will be. Often they won't, and you can reword the sentences / clauses to shorter, snappier versions.

The prospect of marketing makes my toes curl

How interesting!! I'll be on the lookout for this from now on