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Ron V 🏳️‍🌈
@rvillanova312.bsky.social
29- He/Him. Aspiring Writer, lover of arts, sharer of bad memes and more
Current WIP:Utopia(title subject to change)
Next Project:Peter Pan AU
Eve thinks so too :3
November 30, 2025 at 1:28 AM
Nah, it just sorta ends.
Shaw has great premises, and they’re stories I would love.
Issue is the writing and characters.
November 26, 2025 at 2:41 PM
I also read The Salt Grows Heavy. It had a great premise with interesting characters, but same issue as before. Writing felt overly pretentious at times. I’m fine with authors showing their large vocabulary, but it comes off more as her showing off than serving a purpose.
If that makes sense.
November 26, 2025 at 2:11 PM
Nothing But Blackened Teeth by Cassandra Shaw. Cast is all unlikeable and all seem to hate each other, despite being friends for years.
And felt the writing was pretentious by overuse of similes, and big words.
And just full of cliches.
November 26, 2025 at 12:58 PM