Seeing Owen all tied up and gagged would be a eye candy but I'm not expecting anything from anyone

Your story is intriguing to say the least It goes deeper into the story behind the 3 characters And the more the readers view and read it the more they realize that each of the characters have their own issues and 2 of the characters have more intense problems than 1

But in my eyes you've done well with the story itself And adding to Detail Is most blended also you even added animation here and there to where the characters move. But like I said if my opinion or anything I say holds weight then feel free to message me But if nothing I say matters then all well

If my opinion matters or even carries any weight, The visual novel itself is very intriguing, You started it off with the peacock character to add a mystery to it, Because the peacock has different personalities, Then build it up to the 3 main characters. You can do whatever needs improving

Are ideas and suggestions for Glory Hounds allowed?

I know the feeling, I'm told get a job, let girls chase me but the continent I live is cruel and unreasonably unfair... There's nothing for me here, so I really understand the feeling