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I wonder if i'm misunderstanding what the list is. If it's a list of warnings, it should include a formal tone. Self harm in a story needs a warning regardless. If it's a list of what the story contains as a whole, it should be fine, but I can't stress how important a warning is for that subject.
December 17, 2024 at 3:27 AM
It looks good! I would personally substitute 'a touch of' for a simple 'minor', it makes it seem less trivial and more serious, like a warning should be. The ultimate goal is to realistically prepare your reader for what they're about to witness.
December 17, 2024 at 3:20 AM
Depending on if the self harm is the only form of violence, you can give the straight up warning of minor/moderate/severe self harm so readers know what they're getting into. Some readers might be okay with char vs char violence but not self harm. It will help to be specific in that regard.
December 17, 2024 at 2:11 AM
Oooo the halo details are going to be so cute I can already feel it >:]
December 17, 2024 at 1:59 AM
Take a shower to reset, make a written list of every deadline or step so that you can track your progress, aquire a caffinated drink, and hope your mind is on your side. The preparation is just as important as the action
December 17, 2024 at 1:57 AM
It definitely depends on how graphically you portray the harm. If it's not actively happening in the story, but more of a descriptor, it may challenge that. Always good to have a warning, though.
December 17, 2024 at 1:56 AM
They're an integral part of conveying language! Sometimes explaining how a character says something isn't enough! Sometimes the emphasis is needed in those quicker scenes!
December 17, 2024 at 1:50 AM
So glad this is being pointed out, I made the same mistake today lmao
December 17, 2024 at 1:48 AM
Sooo adorable!! The design is perfect!
December 17, 2024 at 1:47 AM
So this guy
December 17, 2024 at 1:46 AM
Lay that mf to rest it's TIME❗️
December 17, 2024 at 1:42 AM
OH I WAS and then!!! Ohhhh and then! He introduced the plot by killing a dog. Oh i threw the book. Threw it.
December 12, 2024 at 7:46 PM
I read The Nest by Gregory Douglas and i thought for SURE they were going to do something like that to introduce the plot [huge mutant radioactive cockroaches] but they swerved into a first person pov😭😭😭
December 12, 2024 at 7:43 PM
LETS GO???? as you should king
December 10, 2024 at 11:25 PM
What maryland cookies do to a mf
December 10, 2024 at 11:19 PM
Definitely! Especially the ones that explain the meaning of the name if you want to play into a theme!
December 10, 2024 at 7:29 PM