I understand this issue. It gets so stressful trying to compose thumbnails sometimes. I like to do narrative illustration and this is the hardest step. The thing you posted is one of my favorite drawings from you! There's nothing wrong with presenting things mostly in a comic like fashion.

Thanks! I have no idea why. I'll try reuploading sometime. They're just closeups.

Deeply depraved psychological abuse, conflicted emotions, and incest with religious undertones.

I love the lighting on the left image!

Thank you! I'm glad it's useful for others to see the WIPs.