You're more than welcome! I'll have to admit, it's less... steamy than I expected coming from you! But it's as well written or better than a lot of stuff I've seen published. I'm very interested to see where you're taking the story!

Holy crap, I did not expect how engaging it would be! I'm on about chapter 31 of Renewal and it's great! I'm seriously impressed with the quality off the writing and story.

So, I tried reading this several years ago, and having not played FO or watched MLP, I could tell it was decently written but I couldn't get into it as I didn't get many of the references.

I restarted it when you posted this; as I have now played a ton of FO, and at least brushed up on MLP...

It was such a rip off. I couldn't believe they went for it.

Not to mention the fact that they were an unknown species when Kirk ran into them, not a species that the same fscking ship had extensive experience with.

The only part that bugs me about that is when I'm too late to see what you posted. Missed opportunity and all that.

Actions speak louder than words.

I stopped watching during Matt. It was already in a nosedive quality wise.

Thank you thank you, you're doing the.. well, maybe not the Lord's work, but you're doing good!

Any hints on where one could find an unsmooshed version, for... research purposes? >.>