I'm not sure what your worried about?, seems perfectly acceptable to me :).

Good on ya Ben , keep it up mate :)

mine are made worse from anxiety & depression & hopelessness :( anyway good on ya for getting out & about !, cheers Paul from Australia:).

Good on ya Ben , I feel for you & I understand your need to get out & get walking Ineed too, before I die from being morbidly obese !, I am on the spectrum & people don't understand the challenges we face,

I'm not an award winning poet but I have written dozens of poems & yes I am on the Autism spectrum, this clown doesn't know what he's talking about!