Mykah Moore
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Bonus tip--frenetic action openings nearly always fail because the reader has no grounds for caring about the action. You need to entice the reader into caring about the story. That done, even "will she drink the tea or not" can be high drama, let alone a laser battle.
January 12, 2025 at 3:59 PM
Bonus tip--frenetic action openings nearly always fail because the reader has no grounds for caring about the action. You need to entice the reader into caring about the story. That done, even "will she drink the tea or not" can be high drama, let alone a laser battle.