I smell a change in the lore for slime biology…

So precious and so traumaed, awwww

I’ll toss my hat in the ring

Well there’s a lot of things I could do. I describe the blood, but not anything about sweat and other stuff like that, which would no doubt be happening in that situation

Well before he dies he needs that description, and maybe a little bit during.

Small details like vegetation on the walls and floor as well as character descriptions. Never wrote the color of the Cade and Riley’s eyes and hair

Yeah this is one of the things I broke through my procrastination on, and I’m proud of it, despite the fact that I need to add a WHOLE lot more descriptions near the beginning for visualization. At least another 1000, but not right now.

I wrote it a while ago, and I wrote it over a couple of months. With over 7000 words though, at least 7 hours. Most likely more.

Lore wise, I’m wondering if this Vanny is still influenced by the Afton Mind Virus or they’re a copycat killer. Or maybe something else entirely

Still looks perfectly homemade, and the overalls are a good addition. Definitely seems like it would make the cleanup blood easier.

I’m horrible at art, but I’d consider myself a good writer.