Thank you! Apologies that I did not see this until now. I likewise enjoyed your poem, The Towels. Those first three lines are incredible. Your work--from what little I've had the pleasure of reading--is possessed of a wonderful restraint

I like this, but it needs MORE. Back to the pile with ye

This one needs to be twice as long. Will revise

Trying to decide if it's good enough to try and publish. The more I read it the less I like it, but that's also true of every poem I've ever written

yay!!!!!! incredible amazing so happy for you :)

Feels a little "gay-tinted glasses" in hindsight. I need to write another version of this with more texture and complexity, methinks